Archive for August, 2010

August 25th

August 25, 2010
I did a talk today at MLC Burwood, a Sydney girls’ school – and was amazed to find that so many of the Year 6 students had read Worldshaker, and one whole class was actually studying it.
I’d already learned that, although it might look more of a boys’ book at first glance, it actually works just as well for girls. But I’ve still been thinking of it as a High School book – now that’s proved wrong too!
Now here’s the best bit! The class that was studying had extended into so many associated activities! One student had made a model of Mr Gibber’s classroom – with tiny Geometry and History books on every desk, and his lessons up on the board – the Noah’s Ark lesson and the lesson on right angles versus obtuse angles versus acute angles.
Another student had made a doll of Sephaltina – perfect, because she’s so doll-like already! There were all kinds of illustrations – they’d gathered every clue on the characters’ appearances – and costume requirements, etc. And a preliminary blurb for a film of the book, with Daniel Radcliffe cast as Col and – oh help, I’ve forgotten – someone else for Riff (Lesley Anne Taylor? a name like that?).
The film angle is getting close to the truth, as Hollywood interest moves from vague to very focused. Meanwhile, the students are going to produce posters for the movie. Some are also going to produce a bottle of Ebnolia’s perfume and advertising copy for marketing it! Wonder what they’ll call it?
The projects aren’t finished yet – but they’ve promised to send me photos when they are. Watch this space!

August 21st

August 22, 2010

A nice confidence-booster yesterday! I did a gig for ‘Youth Reviews the Shortlist’, a videoconference between a number of High Schools in Austalia. I did an author presentation, but the main purpose was for students to review and then vote on the Children’s Book Council of Australia Shortlist for the YA Best Book of the Year.
So the students reviewed and voted, then the Chair opened an envelope and read out the actual winner as announced that day. But the best bit for me was when the Chair took a ‘popular vote’ that included Worldshaker along with the shortlist (since the students had all read Worldshaker too). Yippee! Worldshaker was way ahead as first choice!

August 14th

August 22, 2010
Today in Australia, it was like the first day of Spring. In Wollongong, anyway. Real heat in the sun, a glorious bright warm day. We’ve turned the corner and left Winter behind.
I feel like I’ve turned a corner too – since yesterday. I’ve been struggling to get back into the writing after the overseas tours, struggling over a particular story for a steampunk anthology. Now I know what I needed – I needed to make a start on revising LIBERATOR, the sequel to WORLDSHAKER. I’ve had all the comments in from US, UK and Australia, and I’d been baffled and boggled over how to integrate all the different revisions. All I needed to do was make a start and launch into it – and already I’m excited about the improvements.
It must have been part of the same mood that yesterday I also saw exactly what I have to do with my steampunk story. I rough-drafted the last quarter – it’s almost novella length – and all the parts fell into place. I got a handle on the ‘voice’ too, which has been giving me problems all along. Four separate starts, and never quite getting it right – but now I can!
Yippee! Like the sap in the trees, the creative juices are flowing again!

More Thoughts on Steampunk and Alternative History

August 2, 2010

Here are some more writing tips on stempunk – at least, that’s what they were meant to be, though I think they’ve just ended up as rambles. I’ll decorate them with some steampunk-style USB memory sticks, mostly available for purchase on the net. I used to show the image of one particular steampunk memory stick in talks – I thought it was so cool. Now I’ve discovered there are dozens of ’em!


How you think of steampunk depends on the ancestry you give it, I suspect. If you think of it as a sub-genre of science fiction, you’ll think of it as serious technological speculation, only focused towards the past instead of the future. Gibson and Sterling’s The Diffeerence Engine is serious in that way, and yes, it would make a difference (sorry!) if they got their historical facts wrong.

I think the recent surge in steampunk descends more from fantasy. Writers who’ve grown sick and tired of medieval-type scenarios have opened up another realm of the imagination, inventing cities rather than greenwoods, steam-age technologies rather than dragons and magic. That’s what I love and celebrate – a new territory for imagination.

(And wasn’t Tolkien part-way there before us? What about his industrial scenarios as created by Saruman, and to some extent Sauron? We should never forget that his dragons and Orcsare actually the product of breeding programs carried out by Morgoth in the Pits of Utumno. It was Tolkien’s followers who narrowed the canon and cut down on the possibilities.)


Moving from a medieval-type setting to a 19th century-type setting has many consequences. It’s a step away from simplicity and top-down hierarchy. A 19th century version of society is not only urban but political. Not political in the petty way of contemporary politics (like the poll-driven Australian Federal election currently under way) – I can’t find much inspiration in that.. But the politics of major social movements, revolutions and mass upheavals, yes, that isstirring and dramatic.


Steampunk and Alternate History are a natural fit. I think of Steampunk as a special kind of appeal – the appeal of fantastical old-fashioned technology, developed in ways that real history never got around to. I think of Alternate History as a way of placing that world in relation to our world, the reader’s world.

True, a steampunk world can just be another type of otherworld, and some are. But that’s a little harder to arrange than with a medieval-type world. After all, fairly primitive societies could easily develop similarly, whatever their origins – how could you fail to invent clubs or swords or some kind of tunic?  It’s much less obvious that anyone had to develop flintlock pistols or broughams or tailcoats. That’s starting to look more like one particular history, our history – and if you want to incorporate such elements along with your fantasy inventions, a handy rationale is to suppose that fictional history was the same as real history up to a point – then diverted along a separate track.


Short for Point of Divergence … that is, the first point at which something in your history veers off from real history, leading to ever-increasing difference. The way I see it, there are two approaches. One is to create a steampunk world just because it looks good, just for the sheer delight of imagination – and then tie it on to real history as a secondary move. That’s what I did with Worldshaker – I was part-way through writing the first draft before I came up with Napoleon’s tunnel under the English Channel as my POD. It’s much the same if you think up a POD early, but never allow it to dominate your imaginative creation.

The other approach is to start with a POD, and speculate seriously about what might have happened as a result. This produces Alternate History in the vein for which Harry Turtledove has become famous. It’s got just as much claim to the title, but it isn’t steampunk.

On the subject of PODs, please can we have some more interesting and unusual ones? Hitler won WWII, Napoleon defeated Wellington at the Battle of Waterloo, the Spanish Armada landed and conquered Britain – these PODs have produced great Alternate History from early practitioners in the genre, but surely we don’t have to wear them out. There are so many points where the world could have taken a different turn – no need to fall into standard formulae at this early stage!


The word ‘steampunk’ suggests the Age of Steam, which fits okay. But surely it’s only a pointer, not a hard-and-fast definition. I think any imaginary world based on any phase of the old Industrial Age deserves the title. Starting from the Industrial Revolution in, what, the 1770s? But even before that – what about Jay Lake’s Mainspring? That’s old-fashioned technology from before the Age of Steam, but it has the right feel, the authentic steampunky appeal. I don’t see the value of multiplying sub-genres with terms like Clockpunk.

As for an end-point – even more vague. Certainly, the Edwardian Era has to be included, even though that allows for petrol engines, electrical power and even early plastics. Perhaps what matters is more the old-fashioned feel than the literal fact of when something was invented. Bakelite, for example. In general, I’d say plastics don’t belong in a steampunk world, and bakelite wasn’t taken up in a big way until after WWI. Yet I can envisage that particular kind of plastic in a steampunk world precisely because it was displaced and consigned to the junk-bin of history. It’s out-of-date-ness makes it usable.

What about valve radios? Now we’re really pushing it. I’d let them in, so long as the world they’re let into has plenty of brass and copper and more old-fashioned-y stuff.